I don't know (but I do feel)
Il n'y a pas encore de remix de cette session !
I have been listening to the template track for a long time,
and instead of going nuts, I figured it would be a nice way to spend valentines day to write this song.
I'd appreciate comments on the lyrics, I'm aware of the limited singing skills (liked the last chorus, tho) ;)
this one's for H.
15 février 2015 à 16:58
AnneCozean
neat melody and phrasing.
"been down a long road" - lovely change
"to a song you'll most likely never hear" - well those words and that melody made my heart twinge. your lyrics could be sung in a totally mawkish self pitying manner, but they are absolutely not. vocal melody keeps it uplifted but not without questions. i think it's a beautiful marriage of magical music, profoundly personal and vulnerable lyrics, and a vocal delivery that makes it work. that last repeated verse really brings it to an effective close. glad i caught this one, Gentlemen. it's SOLID! +2
"been down a long road" - lovely change
"to a song you'll most likely never hear" - well those words and that melody made my heart twinge. your lyrics could be sung in a totally mawkish self pitying manner, but they are absolutely not. vocal melody keeps it uplifted but not without questions. i think it's a beautiful marriage of magical music, profoundly personal and vulnerable lyrics, and a vocal delivery that makes it work. that last repeated verse really brings it to an effective close. glad i caught this one, Gentlemen. it's SOLID! +2
15 février 2015 à 23:20
MrSnuts
thank you so much for your review, Anne! I'm a bit speechless tbh :) it's just right you mention the beauty of the music once more - these guys did a fantastic job
+1
16 février 2015 à 01:54
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15 février 2015 à 00:02
15 février 2015 à 09:44
Marceys
Hey that's cool MrSnuts! Deep lyrics there. The best love songs are born out of emotion! Became a great track and tnx for the ride! :)
+0
15 février 2015 à 11:28
MrSnuts
thanks marc! took quite some time to figure out the structure & match the message... never wrote a song in a similar way, moving from part to part. The "i dont know / cold wind blows" part was my initial idea, so I went backwards from there.
i owe you for that piano... thanks a lot, it wouldn't have happened without you :) +1
i owe you for that piano... thanks a lot, it wouldn't have happened without you :) +1
15 février 2015 à 16:29
15 février 2015 à 10:11
Shi
lovely backing track from Marceys, Baer and Mr H and very heartfelt lyrics and vocals from Mr Snuts :)
+0
15 février 2015 à 11:29
15 février 2015 à 11:29
Pop sessions avec Batterie, Clavier, Basse and Vocals:
favoris Pop:
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The Mission
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TEMPO 60 slow groove
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Your Path
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Two Cups
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Good Enough 4 U
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Holding On
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From far away
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Far From home
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Perhaps It’s Okay?
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Sun Gonna Shine Again
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Elbereth
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cuando tu no estes
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Ill Be Back (rhodes)
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~ American Dreams ~
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Hit me up Babe
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The Bowl riders
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The End of a Day
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I Don't Claim to Know
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I Don't Claim to Know either
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My Future Is Bleek
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