Tearing me down
There is a lot going here but I feel there is def things that can be done. synth or bass guitar? Will upload lyrics to this one.
https://youtu.be/EryOAgU4FoM?si=IFcpsIeFBAgktxII
Youtube video
27 janvier 2025 à 20:43
27 janvier 2025 à 20:46
Forsaken
Thanks man! I appreciate that!! I love both of those bands, just about to send that vocal track your way!
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27 janvier 2025 à 20:48
KellsBells
Stunning! I think you nailed the direction you were aiming for! Love all the elements! Looking forward to the lyrics upload. ;) Congrats on a successful track! Sounds great. Love the dark, silent lyrics into the powerful change ups!:W<3
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27 janvier 2025 à 20:50
Forsaken
thank you kells! I was really trying to push my voice here. I appreciate your feedback as always! My eyes are peeled for your next track:W
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27 janvier 2025 à 20:52
KellsBells
As soon as the spirit of Marge Simpson stops possessing my voice from being sick, I'm on it. HAHA Seriously incredible job on this!:W
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27 janvier 2025 à 20:56
Forsaken
awww.. hope you feel better soon! Thanks again! Always means a lot to hear from you and the community!
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rootshell
super cool Josh, has a A Perfect Circle kinda vibe for me (maybe Tool too), with that industrial hard edge :W
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27 janvier 2025 à 23:31
brian k
Cool tune man! If Godsmack,Acid bath and tool had a child, this is the lullaby that would be sung at bedtime!:W
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18 février 2025 à 17:03
Forsaken
Feel free to add guitar to anything . If you.want a track in particular I can cut guitar from it and post it also
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17 juin 2025 à 02:50
RiffR
Really enjoyed this track I like your vocals on this, I have to be honest I'm not a big fan of the Death Growl vocals on a lot of your tracks even though I love heavy metal music of all types. Just me though, hope my comment doesn't upset you ☮︎
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17 juin 2025 à 03:26
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No worries I appreciate you being honest . What don't you like about them out of curiosity? Any critique always helps me . Thanks
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17 juin 2025 à 03:37
RiffR
Not sure why that style of singing grates on my nerves, some might say your getting old but I have never been a fan. I even know a guitarist that has played with bands like that "Alarum" "Insomnium" etc I love the music but not so much the vocals. I am getting old but my brain say's I'm not. Keep on doing what your doing :W
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17 juin 2025 à 03:45
Forsaken
When you said you liked all types of metal it threw me off lol there are a lot of screams to be heard. But I am actually not that good at it and use a plugin to make it sound more brutal. I have been really working on my cleans. I do appreciate the info. I try to take in all critique and learn what I can do to better myself
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17 juin 2025 à 04:02
RiffR
I love most styles of music apart from TS sort of mush. I enjoyed your YT track also very cool
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